You recently stayed at your friends' place, to look after the house while he/she is away. You accidentally damaged something in his/her house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter you should:
-Describe what the accident was
-Explain when it happened
-Suggest how the damage can be fixed
Dear Annie,
I'm just writing to let you know that I've accidentally caused damage to the electric power plug of your apartment yesterday.
Honey, while I was staying at your place, I wanted to use the microwave to prepare some meals. Unfortunately, the thing went wrong when I switched on the appliance because it caused the short circuit. I sensed immediately that it exploited the main power button.
Last night I reached your house a bit late due to some urgency in my office and forgot to order food for myself. I was feeling hungry and thought to prepare maggie noodles in the microwave because that was the only item that I could prepare in few minutes.
Honey, as you'll be arriving tomorrow, I've already booked an electrician visit to your house for the following day. Once he will check the issue and we will be able to fix this soon. I hope you don't mind if I pay for this cost.
Hoping to see you soon!
Yours lovingly
Kattie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: I've
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...ld prepare in few minutes. Honey, as youll be arriving tomorrow, Ive already booke...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... Honey, as youll be arriving tomorrow, Ive already booked an electrician visit to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ll be able to fix this soon. I hope you dont mind if I pay for this cost. Hoping ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62941176471 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40622750293 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.670588235294 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0005882302 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25076500437 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874375146346 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675957679301 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124327855738 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332313385551 0.0580467560999 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.