You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
● describe the problem with the equipment
● explain what happened when you phoned the shop
● say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your kind attention to the non-functional product that I had purchased from your store last weekend.
At the onset, I would like to inform you that I have bought a mixer grinder. When I reached home, I wanted to chop some tomatoes but unfortunately, this machine did not work. After checking the power connection, I realised that there was some technical problem with the product itself.
I immediately called the shop and explained the entire situation. Instead of finding a resolution to my problem, the customer care executive blamed me for not using the article properly. I was highly disappointed with such kind of rude behaviour and negligence.
As it is already more than three days since I filed the complaint but no action has been taken against the issue. I request you to collect the item from my home and generate my complete refund at the earliest. I also want you to explain me the reason why I should not report this matter to the media for further action.
I hope you will start your investigation as soon as possible. I am reachable at +24875557755 for further communication.
Yours sincerely,
John Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...atter to the media for further action. I hope you will start your investigation ...
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Line 6, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...your investigation as soon as possible. I am reachable at +24875557755 for furthe...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 976.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83168316832 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82020105086 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668316831683 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3784803933 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0769230769 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.69230769231 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288206265853 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811382916855 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0343590892841 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128769219575 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0139391796017 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.