Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example: working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)
This is true that unpaid community service today is so important. However, some people assert that it should be a compulsory part of high school programs. For instance, teaching sports to younger generation, etc…. Admittedly, I believe that the unpaid community service is no longer necessary for high school programs owing to innumerable compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that unpaid community service does have a large number of positive effects which are by no means negligible such as, making money is not any think we need. That is, working compulsory in unpaid community service, students learn how they may indeed overcome to do a works correctly. A good illustration of this is working free to lay the grand work for students to find their own abilities. This in turn, the more high school students have to work gratuitous, the more opportunities they may have to find better occupation base on their abilities. This is because, they choose a work that is more compatible with their own personality.
However, another result of unpaid community service is young students may never find how much their work is worthwhile. To put tit differently, students who work compatible may actually confuse in their own reality work life and then may indeed have problem with their employer more and more because they do have no idea about their income. Students, furthermore, may fall in bad situation with co-workers after high school. Simply put, they may do not have idea about others job worth. Take people who work with minimum wage for example. The more ones work with minimum wage, The more think other works are cheap (
To sum up, considering the point discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drown is that whilst I can accept that the unpaid community service is useful, I cannot agree that it is today still strongly the best means of high school programs and I think we have to guard against the unpaid community service.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, then, while, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97891566265 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59768333372 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509036144578 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7814794826 49.4020404114 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.2 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311024992839 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126894219218 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924783418447 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237612668883 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164117850627 0.056905535591 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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