MORE AND MORE PEOPLE ARE USING INTERNET to do a task rather than doing in-person(banking, shopping, hotel booking) do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages.)
Advances in technology result in the growth of online businesses. I strongly support the idea that E-businesses have an edge over traditional businesses. Many people find it convenient and safer to do shopping online than to visit the store in person. In the following paragraphs, I will provide some arguments to support my opinion.
There are a number of reasons why individuals prefer virtual platforms to do various tasks such as banking, shopping, and making various appointments. Firstly, there are no doubts that using online platforms for banking is extremely convenient because, with the click of the button, one can transfer funds and receive payments without standing in long queues of banks.
On the other hand, consumers have a variety of platforms available to do shopping from clothing to kitchen utensils and many more. besides, shopping and banking other services such as utility services, cab or hotel booking, to get an appointment is now not a cumbersome job at the click of the button all these facilities can be availed while sitting at home. In this way, people are in a better position and getting benefits from e-businesses.
Admittedly, there are some disadvantages of online businesses. Cyberattacks are growing more and more innocent people suffered from these attacks. Their personal information is always at risk. Many individuals lost their hard-earned money due to fraudulent acts of hackers. Moreover, some virtual platforms are deceiving consumers by sending them fake products instead of original ones. These are the shortcomings that sometimes reluctance among customers to chose online platforms than traditional ways of performing various tasks.
To sum up, I think strict measures to prevent cyberattacks can bring confidence among customers to choose the digital platform that doing tasks in person. E- businesses bring numerous benefits such as the growth of entrepreneurship in the economy, which helps in solving the problem of unemployment. Ultimately, the development in the economy is possible with the growth of online businesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, moreover, so, while, i think, no doubt, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.42592592593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98961138839 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586419753086 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4947309828 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.94444444444 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218262352531 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0596596061291 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707402676942 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110289805304 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268872443312 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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