Write a letter asking you colleague for assistance with your presentation. Please say
- What is the presentation about?
- What help do you need with it?
- Explain why it is beneficial for everyone.
Dear Mr.Robert,
I am corresponding with you in regard to a presentation about "SQL Server 2014 New Features" which will be held on Saturday, 21st of August in the office. I am going to present this for the colleagues.
As you may know the new release of Sql Server is available now by Microsoft and the company is going to switch from the last version of it to the new one. Thus, attending this presentation can be beneficial for every one because all the employees are working in the programming field.
For this presentation I read many articles and get some good and practical information which are printed in some pamphlets to give to the attendants. Unfortunately I do not have enough time for creating a PowerPoint file. I would like to know if you can do me a favor and prepare it in the next 2 days. This would be very kind of you and a good help.
I am eagerly looking forward to hearing from You.
Best Regards,
Rahi
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For this presentation I read many articles and get some...
In this presentation I will read many articles and get some...
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