Some people believe that family is more important than friends. What do you think?
Human companionship is an essential requirement in an individual's life However, it is arduous to decide whether family is more important than a friend and vice versa In my opinion, family is more important than friends
It is easy to understand why people usually give importance to their parents Firstly, there is a strong bond of faith and belief among the members of a family Either it be a loving grandparent or an elder sibling, it feels safe to discuss the most confidential details of life without the fear of them using it as a means of gossip. Secondly, a guardian will usually be willing to make sacrifices for their loved ones. Undoubtedly, a mother would starve herself to feed her child. Therefore, it is important to value a caring and nurturing environment provided by the homemakers and relatives
On the flip side, there are some advantages as well as disadvantages of depending on friends. Having colleagues and acquaintances is inevitable Making contacts and connections with them makes our work life and social life much better Despite the necessity of these people in our life, it is equally important to keep in mind that not all the people around us are dependable and trustworthy Moreover, friendship has become a means of duping individuals For instance, a recent study shows that more and more youngsters prefer to spent time alone rather than going out and making friends owing to trust issues Thus, it is advisable to choose friends wisely
In summary, although friends play an essential part in a person's life, family members deserve the importance. Because, in future friends may change according to needs but family members will always be there for our support
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 55, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...nship is an essential requirement in an individuals life However it is arduous to decide wh...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
...among the members of a family Either it be a loving grandparent or an elder siblin...
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Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
... important to keep in mind that not all the people around us are dependable and trustworthy Moreover...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ugh friends play an essential part in a persons life family members deserve the importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in summary, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91901408451 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73776832868 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588028169014 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 284.0 20.2975951904 1399% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1397.0 106.682146367 1309% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 284.0 20.7667163134 1368% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 145.0 7.06120827912 2053% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273437874329 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.273437874329 0.084324248473 324% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175802772554 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860237594019 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 143.7 13.0946893788 1097% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -216.78 50.2224549098 -432% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 114.1 11.3001002004 1010% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.74 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 21.67 8.58950901804 252% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 9.78957915832 562% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 115.6 10.1190380762 1142% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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