Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this.
Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain
• Why you are writing to them
• Why you think the insurance should not be increased
• What you want them to do
Dear Sir,
I received a mail yesterday, stating about the increment in my premium of car insurance by a hefty amount which is disappointing as I am already paying a big amount.
I bought my SUV in 2018 and since then, i have been your consistent client as took the fully covered insurance from your company. Every year without any fail, i get it renewed by your company only but this year when i received the renewal letter, to my surprise, the amount surged by two-folds than the previous one. I certainly find this unjustifiable amount and was not at all contented with this act.
The car is getting older, thereby the worth of it is also lowering. As a matter of fact, the premium is as per the current worth of the car which has probably reduced since we bought. Thus, the cost insurance should also lessen despite of this increase.
Now, I am entitled to ask you for the justification of this rise in premium. Moreover, if this new premium is applied, i would like to have some discount in it as being a regular customer of your esteemed company and your company would also not like to lose its clients.
Hoping for a prompt and needful action.
Yours sincerely,
Mary Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...our company Every year without any fail i get it renewed by your company only but...
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Line 3, column 214, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...by your company only but this year when i received the renewal letter to my surpr...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Moreover if this new premium is applied i would like to have some discount in it ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, then, thus, as to, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45327102804 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44169051346 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584112149533 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 214.0 16.3608247423 1308% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 953.0 76.5299724578 1245% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 214.0 16.8248392259 1272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 67.0 4.34317383033 1543% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360255907675 0.216113520407 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.360255907675 0.0766984524023 470% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145543614835 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778252962205 0.0580467560999 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.5 8.37731958763 1271% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -128.81 70.7449484536 -182% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 84.4 7.45979381443 1131% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.01 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 17.05 7.59969072165 224% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 8.62886597938 614% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 87.6 8.54432989691 1025% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 8.15463917526 650% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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