In many countries, children are encouraged in some kinds of paid work. Some people regard it as a completely wrong thing. While others consider it as some kind of work experience, important for learning and taking responsibilities. What are your opinion on this?
It has been a debatable topic whether or not children are encouraged to do part time jobs especially in poor countries. However, I feel childrens’ engagement in paid jobs at an early stage may negatively influence childrens’ physical and mental developments, academic performance and against their basic rights. Hence, it should be discouraged.
Childhood is to enjoy. Undoubtedly, the childhood experiences had a great impact on one’s future. Lives of children living and working in hazardous setting such as firecracker factories, matchbox factories and so on are at risk. Working in such ...
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