Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
How to educate children appropriately has long been a controversial issue. There is a school of thought that teaching sports in educational institutions is a waste of time and resources; however, others believe that physical activities play a crucial part of an education program. I believe that a successful education cannot go without physical training.
On the one hand, it is argued that physical education should not be taught in school for several reasons. Admittedly, pupils have been increasingly becoming busy due to the heavy burden of study. Children are cramped with a lot of knowledge in a variety of subjects in order that they could be entitled enough to further their tertiary education. For example, apart from compulsory curriculum at schools, Vietnamese students tend to pick up a number of extra classes or tutorial lessons. Therefore, sports classes are considered time-consuming. Additionally, practicing physical activities at educational institutions means students can only choose the sports included in a fixed program. Thus, they can be indifferent to playing a sport that is not their favorite one, hence ineffective.
On the other hand, there is a notion that sports play an irreplaceable role in a child's growth. First, it is undeniable that playing sports is the greatest way to support children's biological growth. It is a fact that those who did not take exercise regularly as children tend to grow up with health problems such as obesity or short stature. What is more, taking part in physical activities is a good way to develop interpersonal skills such as teamwork and communication skills, which are essential for children in later life. For example, by playing football, strikers can learn how to assist and connect with their fellow teammates. For these reasons, I strongly believe that sports classes are beneficial for students in both physical and mental aspects.
In conclusion, although there are some reasons why people believe that physical education is not necessary, I side with the view that physical training is one of the key factors of well-rounded education.
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first, hence, however, if, so, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17159763314 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89780175272 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541420118343 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 338.0 20.2975951904 1665% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1748.0 106.682146367 1639% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 338.0 20.7667163134 1628% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 134.0 7.06120827912 1898% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259039484045 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.259039484045 0.084324248473 307% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170565765799 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068809894975 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 171.9 13.0946893788 1313% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -271.59 50.2224549098 -541% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 135.1 11.3001002004 1196% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.19 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 23.95 8.58950901804 279% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 9.78957915832 623% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 137.2 10.1190380762 1356% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.7795591182 566% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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