You recently went to visit a friend in their new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter tell your friend what you liked about his/her new house say what you did or enjoyed most about your stay with your friend suggest when and where you could meet your friend next
Dear Tushar,
I hope you are doing well. Thank you for inviting me to your place last weekend since we have met after a very long time.
The neighborhood has serene surroundings which make the area more relaxing. On top of that, the location of your home is excellent as it has plenty of space around it. Finally, the small but very beautifully maintained orchard garden at the back of your home was breathtaking.
During my stay, the food you served was just so great and delicious. You cooked the best homemade pizza that I have ever tried. Besides, the cocktails you made at your place were the same as the drinks which we have at the Drew House Bar.
I was wondering to meet you again on coming weekend since I felt nostalgic after meeting you. It made me remember my college memories. If you are free, please let me know the day, venue, and time of our meet. I’ll be glad to spend some quality time with you next weekend.
I am hoping to hear from you soon.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 234, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inks which we have at the Drew House Bar I was wondering to meet you again on com...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 204, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...know the day venue and time of our meet Ill be glad to spend some quality time with...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, if, so, well, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 797.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37912087912 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19745189516 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 182.0 16.3608247423 1112% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 797.0 76.5299724578 1041% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 182.0 16.8248392259 1082% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 51.0 4.34317383033 1174% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250565087375 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.250565087375 0.0766984524023 327% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137795892991 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315441694626 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 90.2 8.37731958763 1077% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -96.33 70.7449484536 -136% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 71.9 7.45979381443 964% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.31 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.01 7.59969072165 198% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 8.62886597938 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 74.8 8.54432989691 875% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 52.0 8.15463917526 638% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.