Atomic energy ( Nuclear power )is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger Discuss both view and give your opinion?
Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger.
What is your opinion?
The meaning of Atomic energy is main cause which damage to people live has been increasingly significant in a fast moving and dynamic society. The question here is whether people should or should not this agree. Before giving a reasonable answer to that, it is important to look at the debate from following angles.
On the one hand, almost all people believe that nuclear power is not truly danger for their life. In order words, this may be regarded as nuclear power is very essential for industry and environment. Perhaps one typical reason why that argument remains valid is this power has much potential factors for power generation plants because it can replace many other energies such as the powers of water and wind. More importantly, a considerable factor that could justify this is producing Atomic energy is extremely necessary because it brings many effective finances, it is not only cheap but also it emits less toxic substances for the environment. All things considered, human need produce this power.
On the other hand, another reason is that people disagree with nuclear power using. From another perspective, we can see that Atomic energy is a substance which difficult to preserve and what happen when it seeps out in the environment. There exist examples of such, and the clearest one is the case of an important and fundamental part of habitat marine life is the ocean but for many years, the ocean is becoming a dumping ground for factories and submarines which release too much toxic substances in seabed. Another supporting this is radioactive waste from nuclear power generation poses dangers to human health. In fact, many people who live nearby plenty of these plants tend to get diseases like cancer and Jaundice. In short, this power brings the amount of dangers to the society.
In conclusion, this writing examines a variety of aspects of the given question. Taking a broader speculation of the matter, the result also lies in how people from various backgrounds and ages might interpret it. Whereas this writing would remain open for further discussion, I state my view that nuclear power impacts considerably on social life such as environment and health. Therefore, I think the government should not produce this power and they have some policies to prevent this thing.
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- Atomic energy Nuclear power is becoming more and more popular energy source However some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger Discuss both view and give your opinion 56
- Atomic energy Nuclear power is becoming more and more popular energy source However some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger Discuss both view and give your opinion
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, whereas, i think, in conclusion, in fact, in short, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2038.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 411.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95863746959 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44452786018 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52798053528 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 653.4 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 411.0 20.2975951904 2025% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2038.0 106.682146367 1910% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 411.0 20.7667163134 1979% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 128.0 7.06120827912 1813% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401703082184 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.401703082184 0.084324248473 476% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260606812676 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.249916780403 0.056905535591 439% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 207.4 13.0946893788 1584% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -345.69 50.2224549098 -688% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 163.6 11.3001002004 1448% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.97 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 27.52 8.58950901804 320% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 9.78957915832 552% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 166.4 10.1190380762 1644% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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