Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
I definitely agree that we today live much easier and much more comfortable lives comparing to the generation of my grandparents. However, I cannot say that everything today is better than before. With more advanced technologies and social civilizations, most part of our lives today have been reaching higher level. Therefore, I do believe we certainly live easier and happier.
Firstly, my grandparents were born in the 1920s, a time with different important events and an endless number of wars, such as Anti-Japanese War, the Second World War, War of Liberation, the Establishment of New China, Hungry period, reform and opening-up, etc. It was such a successful achievement that even they and their children could survive. On the other hand, our generations live in much better time. We didn't have to bear hungry, wear old clothes and the main transportation is on foot. Besides, better education contributes us to live a better life in a relatively peaceful era as well.
Secondly, my countryside has changed tremendously than it was decades ago and all people achieved higher life standard. The most significant difference is the buildings and infrastructures. When my grandparents were little, there were all old style houses with earth floor, no electricity and no automatic water, not mention roads and internet. To us astonishment, nowadays the houses has turned into something like villas with electricity, water, road, car, telephone, network and more. It is a place that people love to stay, instead of moving toward big cities to make a living and buy a house elsewhere to have a better life.
Admittedly, today's life is not perfect and the life of grandparents’ generation has many good aspects, for instance, fresher air, fewer competitions, less complicated social environments. But if somebody asks me which life I would rather live, I would undoubtedly choose the life we have now. In my opinion, their lives and times were full of battles and sacrifices, poor and adversities.
In conclusion, we process much more sophisticated material foundation and safe and security. Moreover, we have better spiritual construction, like educational chances and accesses to experience different cultures. That’s why I insist that we live an easier and more comfortable life than 50 years ago.
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| 2023-07-18 | M. MEHRABI KERMANI | 60 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1883.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 369.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10298102981 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95984341254 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 369.0 20.1344086022 1833% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1883.0 100.406767564 1875% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 369.0 20.6045352989 1791% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 162.0 5.45110844103 2972% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291282309863 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.291282309863 0.076458572812 381% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152793832582 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407601428368 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 187.1 11.7677419355 1590% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -311.52 58.1214874552 -536% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 148.4 10.1575268817 1461% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.78 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 25.75 8.01818996416 321% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 61.0 10.002688172 610% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 149.6 10.0537634409 1488% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 61.0 10.247311828 595% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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