These days people pay more attention to artists writer, painter and so on and give less importance to science and technology. To what extend do you agree?
Majority of people, in this modern era, observed to have curiosity towards artists such as writer, painter etc .However, they also have less keen interest towards science and technology. I fully approbate my self with this assertion.
Commencing with the most prominent reasons that why people tends to have dependency on artists, first tenable aspect , youngsters rely on entertainment entities , which brings them dopamine in their brain. Because these curricular ventures are symbol of happiness.Since creativity involved in, people enjoy watching themselves just by giving attention to their creativity.To illustrates, a recent study conducted from university “BOSTON” reveals that over 70% of the students showed keen interest towards as it is reliable source to see as carrier. Consequently, majority of people follow the path of potential shortcut methods, which needs less effort as well as gives satisfaction .Secondly, the vast amount of promotion is done by loads of television channels, artists like singers and movie actors tends to have more reputation and popularity. Therefore, journalists always choose to grow them yo grow their aggrandise among community rather than casting politics.
Nevertheless, reason behind people less attention towards science and technology is that scientist, who never want to disclose their experiments among mankind and technology needs higher intensive coding. As a result, the consistency of both parameter remain below the level as of their less demand.
In compendium, having elucidated all of concerned factors, albeit artists are gaining ground spontaneously, technology reverence is needed to be opted.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.79268292683 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99939022159 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69918699187 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.839500235 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.333333333 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.4444444444 7.06120827912 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189753398615 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651447680261 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524596948157 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104819959656 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306275624363 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.5 13.0946893788 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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