It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
we are living in a world of more than 7 billions people. we are divided into 5 continents and 193 nations. No governments can help all people in the world because that mission beyond their ability. so i totally agree that each government should focus on people in its own country. How ever government should also help people of other country if possible.
Indeed, there are still so many people living with poverty, difficulty in every country. A government even doesn't have enough ability to help all people in its country because it has too many things to care while budget and human resouce of the government are limited. In addition, government is an association represented for civilian established for benefit of them. Therefore, it's necessary to focus on people in their own countries.
On the other hand, no government can exist independently in globalisation world now. we have had many organizations found to bring and protect benefit for people of many countries such as WTO, WHO, ASEAN, EU. goverments join hands to make values for the organizations that they take part in. it is like a government are helping people in other countries.
In conclusion, in my opinion, governments should focus on helping people in their own countries and also helping people in the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, still, therefore, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 216.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95833333333 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80042848353 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4993907956 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.443902556778 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16854564969 0.084324248473 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.14016807865 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329163283454 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131661106807 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.3 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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