It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child's development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays the most significant role.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While there is a contradiction that kids’ growth is influenced by peers and social media as they spend more time on entertainment but family environment cannot be excluded as has an important role to shape their evolution. This essay will shed light on both these views.
First of all, we should not ignore that kids have a growing brain and can grasp things very easily. Factors like television, music and watching plethora of reality shows influences them, as media is easily accessible with the advancement of technology. They do not only has the urge to become like their favorite character but also tries to follow their actions. Besides, entertainment reality shows inspire kids in fruitful and nonproductive route to follow. For instance, music show called sare ga ma pa inspire many kids to become singers, also they want to buy the same toy as they have seen with their mates. Moreover, certain shows are not good for mental development. Thus, media can also create a negative impact on mental and physical growth of tiny tots. Not only media but also friends are the first to motivate them to explore new.
More importantly, it has been observed that the formation of child’s personality mostly depends on the family. A kid without parents do not even understand the basic behavior such as discipline and respect. Kids are prone to repeat the actions as done either by father or mother. For example, during my childhood, I had always followed the footsteps of my parents and grandparents in numerous ways such as while putting on particular clothes according to occasions as well as respectfully treating my guests. Family environment not only teaches little ones how to stay calm but also teaches not to be furious and react in the situation. Therefore, those families who has negative aura has a most significant role by not getting kids to follow correct path.
In my opinion, Not allowing kid to deal the elements external to family have an impact on a child's development, family’s role has not to be taken for granted to make children a better person to live in society by imbibing basic etiquettes.
To recapitulate, this essay illustrated that television, friends and music are not the only key factors in the process of a child's development instead, family is the most prominent one among all factors.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9693877551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7319463429 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56887755102 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1215202065 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124734577576 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381828607807 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437908647949 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834091206182 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035279788328 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9693877551 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7319463429 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56887755102 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1215202065 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.222222222 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124734577576 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381828607807 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437908647949 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834091206182 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035279788328 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.