Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world, while others believe that scientists are more influential. Discuss both sides of view and give your opinion.
People have different views whether ministers have more effect on the globe or scientists put a more impact on the world. Although some individual think that politicians have the greatest influence, I firmly believe that scientists have more effect.
On the one hand, some people think that authorities put a lot of impact on the globe, there are various reasons behind this. The first and foremost reason is that politician play a important role for the development of countries, because ministers give a shape to country. Politicians are law maker as well as ruler, thus they not only put impact on country, but also have a greatest influence globally. For example, the government made law about denomination, it was accepted by the whole world, so politicians have the more effect on the globe. Secondly, the successfullness of the whole world is depend on ministers, like - success can be considered according to the rules and laws that are made by government.
On the other hand, I opine that scientists have more impact on the world, there are various reasons behind this. Firstly, there is no doubt that scientists have changed the human life by adding more facilities in their life. For example, in the past humans spent life in caves and they completed their needs by hunting only scientists have changed their life like nowadays people stay in multibuilding because of scientists. Secondly, today technology make the human life better and individual entertainment their self with the help of technology, and technology is the gift of science. For example, new types of entertainment sources are developed like - Television, new type of mobile phones, because of this they entertain their life and make their life more relaxed.
In conclusion, while some individual think that ministers have the greatest effect, I firmly opine that scientists put a more impact on whole world.
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1585.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12944983819 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78659988242 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482200647249 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1282680355 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 121.923076923 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6923076923 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300438209397 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12870675735 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102437280712 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2330871586 0.151304729494 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104675767068 0.056905535591 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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