You have received a bill from the company which supplies the electricity to your house. The bill contains a figure much higher than you expected.
Write a letter to the manager at the electricity company. In your letter
• tell the manager about the letter you received
• explain why you think this amount is too high
• describe what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain regarding my home electricity bill which is beyond my expectations. I am Tina, living in park avenue and have been using electricity provided by your company for two years.
I received a bill on 1st May for the duration of one month. As per the bill description, It states that a total of 1000 units was consumed in the previous month which cost me 20000 rupees. I am surprised by this figure because it is not accurate as per the current single unit rate.
Moreover, I would like to add here that for the last fifteen days I was out of town and, hence, at my place the use of electricity was totally shut. Because of that, I could not understand how this large amount has occurred.
Could you please check the mistake from your systems and help me to resolve this issue. Please reconsider my case and give me the correct bill as soon as possible.
I look forward to a prompt revert from you.
Yours faithfully
Tina
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...vided by your company for two years. I received a bill on 1st May for the dura...
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Line 5, column 175, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...umed in the previous month which cost me 20000 rupees. I am surprised by this fig...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, may, moreover, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55681818182 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50061975789 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664772727273 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1723031531 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9090909091 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218531217972 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0770837758493 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455296719678 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110461661611 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499323982314 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.