Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve this problem?
In this day and age, human beings cause deforestation around the globe, which results in inevitable repercussions related to natural habitats. To deal with this issue, citizens should take part in some positive pursuits with the main aim is conservating the environment.
There are numerous solutions to minimize deforestation, one of the most noticeable formulae is submitting stringent environmental regulations. The illicit removal of all trees from large areas is forbidden. Therefore, if someone is intentionally constant to deforest, they must incur some harsh punishments. For example, when cutting down a huge array of valuable plants, the outlaws have to be incarcerated within five to ten years. Another solution is that creating jobs for unemployees. Most people participating in illegal pursuits of deforestation are out-of-work, so if workers take a chance to join true jobs, even jobs with high incomes, they might no longer misdeed one more time.
Besides, shrinking the number of papers used is essential to the environment, which can do by some environmentally friendly approaches. First and foremost, there are a large number of paper products that can be reused. Take notebooks as an example, the notebooks are no longer consumed, they may be transformed into recycling plants with the aim of creating new products. Secondly, the authorities should raise the awareness of the public about utilize recycling goods, which has the deep purpose insight is protecting the environment.
Solving the environmental consequences associated with deforestation is an exceedingly arduous process, but people all over the world should engage in this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...proaches. First and foremost, there are a large number of paper products that can be reused. Take...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56692913386 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17932826494 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.649606299213 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7011021861 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193798862087 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615311863448 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548849488889 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126999454287 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0590654108628 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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