You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend.
In your letter:
tell your friend what the event was
explain why you think your friend would like the event
invite them to come to the event with you
Dear John,
I hope you're doing good and how're Pam and little Amy? I'm writing to tell you about an event that I've recently attended and I'd like to invite you all to the next event.
As for the event, I went to a cultural festival at Rose Garden with Malvika last week. Our college's student union organizes this event every month. When I went there, first there was a folk dance performance by young artists and then different sections for traditional clothes, authentic food and some handcrafted household items. Apart from these, a fun-filled camel ride for every age group was a new addition this time.
As far as I know, both of you're big foodies, and this event offers plenty of mouth-watering Asian cuisines to enjoy. In fact, one can bake or cook as a volunteer in one of the stalls for fundraising for cancer patients. This is sort of the same fundraising as we used to do by washing cars during the school volunteers programme. I'm sure you'd like to take part in this activity for such a worthy cause.
Having said that, I'd like to invite all of you to the next month's event. This would also be a wonderful opportunity for young Amy to see the diversity of Indian culture and of course a get-together of both families. I hope you would make it.
I look forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes,
Ell
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: you're
Dear John, I hope youre doing good and howre Pam and little Amy...
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Suggestion: I'm
...oing good and howre Pam and little Amy? Im writing to tell you about an event that...
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Suggestion: I've
...writing to tell you about an event that Ive recently attended and Id like to invite...
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Suggestion: I'd
...an event that Ive recently attended and Id like to invite you all to the next even...
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Suggestion: you're
...this time. As far as I know, both of youre big foodies, and this event offers plen...
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Suggestion: I'm
...during the school volunteers programme. Im sure youd like to take part in this act...
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Suggestion: you'd
...he school volunteers programme. Im sure youd like to take part in this activity for ...
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Suggestion: I'd
...ch a worthy cause. Having said that, Id like to invite all of you to the next m...
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Line 9, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'months'' or 'month's'?
Suggestion: months'; month's
...d like to invite all of you to the next months event. This would also be a wonderful o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, so, then, apart from, as for, in fact, of course, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 239.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54393305439 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46544722099 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652719665272 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1246612564 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5714285714 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271629551653 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872828956213 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744794307932 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152211113622 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846024610136 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.