Your town council has decided to demolish an historic building due to lack of funds to renovate. Write a letter to your counselor . In your letter, you should say:
why it is important to preserve the historic building
how the funds could be generated.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my concern about your decision to knock down the Independence Palace, one of the most crucial historic building of Saigon because of a shortage of budget for renovation.
I am a resident of the city, and it was such a big shock to me when I heard about the news on television last week.
The building has existed for more than 50 years, and it is now used for storing a variety of historical items such as pictures and artefacts. Therefore, it is considered a remarkable tourist attraction to interest thousands of international visitors annually. More importantly, a number of local schools often organise educational tours to give students an opportunity to expand their knowledge about the history of the country during the wartime.
To me, there are several ways to receive financial support to maintain the building operation. First, you should consider increasing the entrance fee so that we can collect extra amounts of money from ticket sales. Second, you should also ask for donations from local people. I believe that these are possible measures if people realise the value of this historic landmark.
I hope that you will take my suggestions into account.
Yours faithfully,
Dat Tran
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my concern about...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...estions into account. Yours faithfully, Dat Tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00480769231 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79415450026 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701923076923 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7625273989 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6363636364 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158232853501 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523404241335 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436212643716 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0647734658534 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514166509641 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 7.59969072165 119% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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