The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
With the rise in demand, the necessity becomes the mother of invention has been proved to be true to match the lifestyle with the help of readymade food. This essay shall discuss its drawback and benefits with logical conclusion.
To begin with, it has been noticed that the modern way of living and hectic work schedule has forced people to rely on frozen food. The family where husband and wife both are working unless work on time management and food, becomes difficult to maintain healthy lifestyle. It is advantageous in a way that it does not take time to stand in kitchen for long and cook, rather it saves the time that can be spent with family or friends. Moreover, it is a savior for bachelors as they can easily find ample of packed food to eat. Besides, there are many countries where keeping a maid for cooking purpose will cost like a month salary. For instance, country like Canada where people cook on their own because the maids costs more, so it becomes easy when the options like bread, salted food are easily available.
On the other hand, the obvious disadvantage is the unhealthy food. Undoubtedly, it has been noticed that the maintenance of food involves adding preservatives that can lead to serious health problems. Even if somebody eats food like cheese very often, it will create health ailments for them. Those who are allergic to certain ingredients like sodium benzoate cannot eat it and keeping ready to eat food for long becomes stale leading to food poisoning. Those who are diet conscious can end up consuming plethora of fat. For instance, anyone orders pizza to quench their hunger would lead to weight gain. Although, children loves to eat burgers but eating frequently makes them obese as one of the study done suggested kids having home cooked food are 60% healthier than kids eating junk food.
To conclude, I would rather say, time constraint pushes to eat convenience food, however, can be consumed sometimes but not every time as it may lead to serious health issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, as for, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82997118156 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37642276589 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593659942363 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7461175298 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6875 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169082604078 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561524322999 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377981370585 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10032052533 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399872415524 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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