disadvantages of living in cities
In today's world many people today choose to move out of crowded cities due to the many limitations of city life. This is also a fairly reasonable decision and also easy to understand.
Firstly, living in the city, although there are many good things such as comfort and modernity and does not bring us the tranquility because the city is always busy, bustling. So many people who love the peace of mind will choose to relocate to deserted places, villages and away from big cities
Secondly, they choose to move out of the big cities because they want to rest and they want a more normal and simple life. In the countryside they can also do what they like without the pressure as if they were in the city.
And finally, city life will always force us to work for long periods of time without stopping so it can be stressful and exhausting. So many people choose a more normal life and they will enjoy rest and live better lives when they leave the big cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ages and away from big cities Secondly, they choose to move out of the big citie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47159090909 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19155468374 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0740722279 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1428571429 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186430815022 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889826460296 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634948294461 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123223361592 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517898780034 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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