Your friend would like to visit you but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come

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Your friend would like to visit you, but unfortunately you are not free when they want to come.

Hi Buddy!

It is so good hear from you after so long and extremely overwhelmed to know that you are planning to come along with your family during this summer vacation at my home.

Trust me I was so excited to host all of you until I received an adhoc request from my supervisor to visit USA for an important assignment. I have my flight tomorrow morning at noon time and I will be taking my wife along with me. Unfortunately, there will be no one at home to welcome you.

I was wondering instead of this week, if you could postpone your trip in the following week and I will check with Vivek as well and we could probably enjoy the reunion with more quality time. Let me know if that sounds interesting to you.

Please accept my apologies for this week and hope to catch up with you next week. Let me know if I could get you something back from USA.

Cheers
Gaurav

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 166.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31927710843 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31445281385 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644578313253 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.3351322474 44.8134815571 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178268734285 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788660466279 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496579305817 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122174701265 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0301100206546 0.0580467560999 52% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.78 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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