Some people think that news and media are affecting our life in a positive way while others disagree. What is your opinion?
It is believed that news and media have beneficial effect on the lives of human beings, however, some people consider these means as negative for the people. There are various positives and harmful sides of the means of communication, which will be discussed before giving any opinion.
Commencing with benefits, first and foremost point to be considered in the favor of sites and content is great knowledge, which can be grasped by people within no time and conveniently. Nowadays, with the advent of technology , persons can get huge knowledge about national and international happenings, it will help them to remain aware of surroundings within their comfortable zone. As an instance, during Covid-19 pandemic, when lockdown was imposed, people were able to get up-to-date information about statistics of cases of disease while sitting at home through Google and YouTube. Hence, news and media has important role to play in the lives of people. Furthermore, media helps people to remain connected with their loved ones as well as money can be earned through this, for example, by promoting products and other stuff. Therefore, it is proved as fruitful.
On the other side, opponents believe it affects people because the content available on media has lack of authenticity. There has always been a question mark on the accuracy of information available on social sites, as anyone can post anything, which is not accurate at all times. In addition, violence can also be increased due to violent and hurtful content, which would raise conflicts among people. As an example, many religious and raciest conflicts are being caused by rivals of the nations, which is becoming the cause of interstate war. Therefore, content available on media and false news would have ill-effect on natives.
In my opinion, despite some negative sides, media and news have good role to play in the lives of individuals which cannot be neglected. Since long ages, these are being proven advantageous and may would continue in the future.
To conclude, although there are some wrong results are occurred as consequence of lack of authenticity, yet advantages cannot be overlooked. Government should take action against the people who promote conflicts and vulgarity on media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1903.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24242424242 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75694307459 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581267217631 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4933804026 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.941176471 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3529411765 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174119937641 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573476114695 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05434545364 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102058644385 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253656394456 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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