Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world.However,these days fewer and fewer leople appreciate art and turn their focus to science,tecnology and business
Why do you think that is?
What could be done to encourage more people to take interests in the art.
According to fact nowadays art is becoming die out from our life whereas it plays a big role.Majority of people do not appreciate art and they focus on science,technology and business.
In this essay I will explain why it happens and gives some solutions which can lead people to take interests on Art.
To begin with another possibility effect of it,if we do not pay attention that the value of art will decrease it means it is problem for Earth as it people can relax or lose their boredom.In addition,art is our ancestor's heritage to us ,therefore,we should keep and continue.As an exapmle every country has own art type,over the years ancestor of them kept it safe and gave today's generation.
To put it more simply in today's world there is developed science,technology and business for humans they are valuable than art.Besides,all with the help of it peoplecan find money.As far as I am concerned we should organize competition and for winners there must be expensive gifts.In addition goverenment should create incerdible and outstandting Art Centre which can attract people's attention.Apart from that Art Centre set some discounts for entering.Another solution for that once a month pupil need to go practical lessons owing of it they can acquire sufficient amount of knowledge about art.
In brief,if art disappears from our life it possibly brings any issues to life.Thus we should value it as much as possible
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, in addition, in brief, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03813559322 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15489649211 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648305084746 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 186.930575348 49.4020404114 378% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 237.8 106.682146367 223% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.2 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.2 7.06120827912 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182337600917 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10137570978 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373593301234 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10137570978 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373593301234 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.9 13.0946893788 198% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.77 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 11.3001002004 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.