Teaching children and young people how to behave is the responsibility of parents,
not schools or government.
To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Educating the youngest generations is often a topic of debate. Many people argue that it is the duty of the family to teach their children an appropriate social behavior. In my opinion, although parents are responsible for their children until their majority, I would object that the educational system and the community in general have also an essential role in their education.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that parents are responsible for their children as the law requires feeding them and providing them with a shelter and education until their majority. Their behavior in society will be primarily modeled at home as they will repeat what they have seen at home. As a consequence, it is primordial for the parents to be a role model in order to give their children the best example to follow.
On the other hand, I believe that parents are not the only players in children education. Schools and associations are an important place where to socialize with persons coming from outside of the family cell. Teachers, educators and other children have a crucial role in the development of the children’s social skills, as they will be acquainted to individuals from other social and family backgrounds. A child without any contact with the outside world would experience difficulties to be successfully integrated into the society.
To summarize, although the role of parents is crucial to prepare their children to future social interactions, they are not the sole responsible for that, as they delegate their education to the community when they are at school. In my opinion this will give children the opportunity to be given other examples than the ones given at home, developing better develop their social skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 424, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ir children the best example to follow. On the other hand, I believe that parent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, in general, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05944055944 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80893736165 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48951048951 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3920680767 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130040938773 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572510856794 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386944438224 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897515464297 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133348161467 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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