Your friend had made a plan for you to see a movie together but you cannot join him. Another friend of yours is willing to go.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-explain why you cannot go anymore
-say who can go instead of you
-say why this person is a good person to go with
Dear Sahil,
I hope you are doing well. I know that you can't wait for our next meetup on coming Saturday. However, I would not be able to come because I am stuck up with a heavy load of work and you know that work comes first.
I have a meeting scheduled on Saturday morning out of our town in Vancouver. So, I'll be catching a flight on Friday afternoon to Vancouver and will be staying for the next seven days since I have to sign this new client with my firm. As you know, work is my number one priority to me, I have rescheduled our meetup once I'll be back.
I know we were going for a movie and you have already booked a ticket in advance, Since I couldn't come due to work, you can take my roommate Divya as she too had the same plans to see the movie, and the extra ticket which you bought for me will not be wasted.
Divya is just like you and you'll find out once you meet her. If you are comfortable with going along with Divya, I'll ask her to come along with you. Apart from that, you could spend an evening with her by going to a new restaurant in the town. Both of you are a foodie and would love to enjoy each other company. Once again, I am sorry for canceling at this point and I hope you understand the situation.
I can't wait to see you soon after my business trip.
Regards,
Shwatank
I
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 44, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ope you are doing well. I know that you cant wait for our next meetup on coming Satu...
^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...rning out of our town in Vancouver. So, Ill be catching a flight on Friday afternoo...
^^^
Line 5, column 321, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... me, I have rescheduled our meetup once Ill be back. I know we were going for a...
^^^
Line 7, column 91, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ady booked a ticket in advance, Since I couldnt come due to work, you can take my roomm...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 28, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... wasted. Divya is just like you and youll find out once you meet her. If you are ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: COMFORTABLE_WITH_VBG[1]
Message: Use simply 'comfortable going'.
Suggestion: comfortable going
... find out once you meet her. If you are comfortable with going along with Divya, Ill ask her to come a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 114, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...omfortable with going along with Divya, Ill ask her to come along with you. Apart f...
^^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ope you understand the situation. I cant wait to see you soon after my business ...
^^^^
Line 14, column 9, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my business trip. Regards, Shwatank I
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1066.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 260.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.1 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06429207603 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565384615385 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2683076783 44.8134815571 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1428571429 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233868178736 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883010411245 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568529002062 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140315021093 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663506978481 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.5 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.11 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.