You recently read an article in a newspaper about your childhood friend with whom you have lost contact for a long time.
Write a letter to the editor in your letter:
1. Say which edition and when the article appeared
2. Explain why you lost contact with your friend
3. Say how you want them to help you to get back in touch
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inquire about the person in the recent article published in The Times newspaper. His name is Ali Tavakoli, and he used to be my intimate friend when we were child and we lost touch after he moved to England.
I read the Persian edition of the article the number of 3459117 and it was published on the website on May 25th. As a matter of fact, we were classmate and also neighbors; we would go to school and play football almost every day together. He, however, move to London with his family in the summer of 2004 for good.
Due to the fact that there were no social applications such as Telegram or WhatsApp add the time, we completely lost contact. I am positive that had there been the internet networks, it would not have happened.
Therefore, I really look forward talking to him after all these years. He would be surprised as well, without any doubts. I would like to ask you if you could neither give me his contact or inform him of my letter. It would be great if you contact me via this email address: meysamrezaei@gmail.com
Thank you in advance,
Hope to receive your response soon,
Meysam Rezaie
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, really, so, therefore, well, after all, such as, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57894736842 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61151113052 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665071770335 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5251555928 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.90909090909 4.34317383033 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242607594537 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073659671027 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064396497145 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109586344884 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229468365021 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.