In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a
year between finishing high school and starting university studies.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who
decide to do this.
It is quite common for young adults in several countries to have a break
from studying after graduating from high school.These days, more and more young
adults are opting to take a gap year before embarking on their educational institutions
state of what they’re going to do. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of this
trends.
The reasons for this trends may involve the recognition for young adults
who passes directly from school to university in terms of general knowledge and
experience of the world. Additionally,a student who has had the opportunity to
experiment with different jobs will probably have the field in which they could
excel. By contrast, those who have spent some times earning a living and traveling to
other places with a broader view of life and better personal resource to draw on.They
intend to be more independent, which is a very important factor in academic study and
research, as well as giving them an advantage in terms of coping with the challenges of
their life and becoming independent their families for a period time.
However, young adults are certainly dangers in taking times off at that
important ages. Young adults may end up returning to their university course for a
particular jobs or finding it difficult to study in an academic environment. But overall,I
think this is less likely today when academic qualifications are essential for getting a
reasonable career to impressible ages and unwise decision. If they’re completely this
English course to get ready for to the main program, they can finish an IELTS examination.
My view is that young people should be encouraged to broader these
horizons.That is the best way for them to get a clear perspective of what they’re
hoping to do with their lives. Students with such a perspective are usually the most
effective and motivated ones, and then taking a year may be the best way to gain this.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04643962848 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76870210666 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.211040733 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.181818182 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3636363636 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310301977217 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109625780605 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627784294045 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762536639584 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588347125648 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.