After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude. In your letter:
- Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
- Express your appreciation
- And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Thomas,
My name is Shwatank, we met a few days ago when you helped me fight with a group of thieves trying to lift money and phone from my pocket. I am writing this letter to thank you for your rock-solid support during the time when I was getting robbed by those robbers.
These days strangers do not help so easily, but, when you saw me in the street where I was struggling with those thieves you immediately came to rescue me without giving a second thought. Also, I noticed that you asked your pet dog to bark at the robbers which helped a lot in that situation. And, after those mobsters were gone, you did a first-aid as I hurt my forehead when I fell on the ground. I am so grateful for your expedited actions that saved me from those bunch of thieves.
I would love to extend this newfound friendship into a long-lasting one. So, I invite you to come to my place for lunch or evening tea on the coming Saturday. When I told my parents about your help, they were extremely happy, relaxed, and want to organize a lunch for you and your family at your new farmhouse. Also, I have attached a phone number, so please call me and let me know about your plans to come to my place.
I hope to see you soon.
Warm regards,
Shwatank
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 52.0 32.9175257732 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34745762712 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3019357853 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614406779661 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3004580668 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.276415403255 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102066497029 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678233624243 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175733074418 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194088883116 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.