The picture below shows how a hot balloon works. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The pictorial diagram illustrates the basic components of a hat balloon as well as its inflation/operation mechanism. However, before the modus operandi is begun, a few tasks must be completed in order to set the balloon up properly and prime it for a safe and delightful flight.
As depicted, the hot balloon consists of three main parts, namely, envelope, burner, and basket that have to be securely connected with rope, before filling the envelope out with the cold air. In addition, the envelope comprises three segments, including parachute valve, vertical gores, and horizontal panels. Hanging on the handle of the basket, cylinders contain the propane fuel. To ignite a fire, propane has to be mixed with the parachute’s cold air.
Due to the portability of hot air compared with that of cold air, hot air moves and stays at the upper level, which provokes the hot balloon to swing slightly upwards. However, the process is not complete as the hot air has to escape during the flight. To do so, the aforementioned valve, positioned on top of the parachute, plays an indispensable role, as the hot air is evacuated through this.
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life Which do you consider to be the major influence Give reasons for your answer and include 84
- The picture below shows how a hot balloon works Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features 78
- Bullying is a big problem in many schools What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 11
- Some people think one should stay all their life in the same job whereas others advocate changing a job from time to time Discuss both views and give your own opinion 89
- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, well, as to, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 954.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99476439791 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90185578115 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607329842932 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9021717556 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107761722363 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402183598677 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368751994667 0.0843802449381 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685329611415 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240027337509 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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