Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many people faced up to the worst cases such as an unexpected job or limited to income which is be changing and seeking solutions. While some do not choose these situations, I convinced that self-development and attempt to get higher achievements to have more valuable contributions.
Firstly, it is true that life always takes people in the dilemma of situations; in simple terms, people should be satisfied with changes in their lives. In fact that these changes could be caused risks as well as required encourage themselves to achieve their effort. Due to accepting unfavourable situations, people may have a stronger feeling of safety, while simultaneously maintaining themselves psychologically to some extent. For example, when new opportunities come to their job, it is not certain that this career has delighted their desires. In some cases, they could not handle it at the earliest time such as economic downturn or disasters.
However, others debated that we should have a proactive attitude and find solutions to move up negative predicament. Furthermore, these could have more positive aspects that may lead to motivate them to steer clear of the worst situations. For instance, if learners do not attempt to beyond themselves, even if their mark does not show better that causes bad emotions such as give up another time. Because of this, people need to figure out their fault for not being illiterate.
In conclusion, instead of accepting their circumstances, the best ways are to seek solutions for their risks. Additionally, it may avoid a bad mental attitude in dilemma situations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as well as, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1351.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23643410853 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02168762747 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6011319552 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.923076923 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8461538462 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7692307692 7.06120827912 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14941933993 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0522757378086 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325012008711 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0940357007301 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216187962434 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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