Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life countryside is more suitable. What are the disadvantage and disadvantage of both place
There are many arguments surrounding where children should be spring. Some people think children should raise in modern and active cities while some others said the safe environment of the countrysides is fit for them. The positive and negative sides will be discussed before I give my opinion.
It is not denied that growing up in cities brings many advantages and opportunities for kids. Children should access to high-quality education, requirements in extra-curricular or entertainment activities. Of course, the government and spent more financial budgets on investment in schools, infrastructure and facilities in cities, so, the number of schools and shopping malls is more than the village. This is the reason why children in metropolitan cities have more choices in their study paths. Moreover, cultural diversity and events take place on a routine basis in which they can participate and get connected to people who are foreigners and their culture. But life in cities has its drawbacks. Because of the approach of technology early, children living in urban areas are more susceptible to eye diseases than kids in rural areas. Besides, the cost of living in modern cities is too high and therefore, parents usually are not enough much more time to take care of their children.
In terms of living in the village, it is too offers a set of advantages. To beginning with people in cities usually face to population whereas fresh air of rural areas is suitable for healthy development of young generation. In addition, thanks to large spaces and few vehicles, children can easily perform their relaxing activities instead of watching television at home. However, kids who grow in the village do not access to high-standard education due to few good schools and colleges. They are also limited connected with modern tools like the internet or computers.
In conclusion, life in the city is better but the government needs to take some measures to increase the standard of living of children who live in rural areas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 626, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...participate and get connected to people who are foreigners and their culture. But life...
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Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: TO_TOO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'too'?
Suggestion: too
...t access to high-standard education due to few good schools and colleges. They are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, in conclusion, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87959956659 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578787878788 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8660741662 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7058823529 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52941176471 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273261740636 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07503890851 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779050173003 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154468354417 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556951421392 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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