In today’s job market it is far more important to have practical skills than theoretical knowledge. In the future, job applications may not need any formal qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Practical abilities, rather than academic knowledge, are more crucial in today's employment market. The process of recruiting employers may no longer require formal qualifications in the future. From my perspective, I think both of them play an essential role of a well-qualified worker.
We cannot deny that there are some jobs that must require the qualifications to be accepted like doctors or engineers. Because they have to be highly professionally trained and do not just based on the experience, having a degree can be considered as an affirmation that they completed the learning process at their universities. We cannot trust a doctor in an emergent situation if they do not have any qualifications, and employers will be as well. Employers need to assess the learning process to decide whether they should accept him or her.
Another thing that we should not overlook is that the more you excel in something, the more revenue you gain. The salary of employees will be completely dependent on their abilities as it can reveal the effort you put throughout the learning process and the achievement you can acquire. English teachers cannot ask for a salary of up to 1000$ if they do not have any teaching or foreign language qualifications to prove that they deserve it. This is not fair to other contestants.
Nevertheless, when it comes to career-related physical conditions or art forms, qualifications can be considered to be abundant. This can be clearly exemplified by many cases of famous singers who must not graduate from prestigious musical institutions. They just have a beautiful voice and know how to practice to improve their singing skills, they still can earn a great amount of money. Or the adolescents who want to become billionaires in a specific field like the economy can enter the real-life situation to gain more experience rather than entering the economic university like John. D. Rockefeller.
In conclusion, there are many robust pieces of evidence that recruiters should take both into consideration in job application if they want to have excellent employers. While qualification brings authentication, real-life experience allows them to accomplish the work in an efficient way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$1000'.
Suggestion: $1000
...achers cannot ask for a salary of up to 1000$ if they do not have any teaching or for...
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Line 4, column 303, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'practice improving'.
Suggestion: practice improving
... have a beautiful voice and know how to practice to improve their singing skills, they still can ea...
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Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an efficient way" with adverb for "efficient"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ence allows them to accomplish the work in an efficient way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, nevertheless, so, still, then, well, while, another thing, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1864.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22128851541 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17891507026 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9465799671 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.647058824 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181966659609 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581268177004 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0454805578449 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10328586349 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322312842762 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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