In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and available. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disavantages?
Junk food is the best option for people with the hectic schedule thus it is easy for people to find fast food anywhere. Moreover, junk food is increasing inexpensively and obtainable in many nations. Although the development of junk foods bring benefits to the community, there are certain drawbacks needed taking into considered. Personally, I believe the demerit of this phenomenon is superior to the merit.
On the once hand, the fast food chains with the low-price bring benefits to community. People can have more time to relax with fast food. For example, after spending eight hours in office, people can have a tendency to relax instead of performing other activities like cooking. Furthermore, the progress of junk food also contribute to economy growth with the tax which our country has gained from the business like KFC, McDonal to name but a few. Besides, the expansion of company can reduce the unemployment rate in many countries.
On the other hand, although fast food is affordable and covenient, it is very harmful for health. Junk foods are high in saturated fats and added sugars which are detrimental to people’s health. If we eat junk food too much over a long period, it would lead to some illness like insrease blood pressure, heart attrack... to name but a few. The more fast food people consume, the more ability people get unhealthy. In addition, the government has to spend the budget on health care which can lead to some economic issue.
In conclusion, in spite of the fast foods bring benefits to people life. I still believe the drawbacks of junk food’s development outweigh the benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, thus, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95970695971 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63252507089 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545787545788 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.392100968 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6470588235 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35294117647 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178061470518 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650109150283 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418313267798 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131150721701 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388644521751 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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