some people say that no one should do the same job forever, while others believe that doing same job is beneficial of the individual company and society. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this present era, every people want wealthy lifestyle, therefore they do the various job in their life. Few citizens think people have to do different jobs, whereas others do not support the statement. They feel doing the same job is helpful to them and society. This essay will explain both aspects and also gives my opinion in the following paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of benefits of having various Jobs in life. First and foremost, if people do the same job for a lifetime, then they feel that work is boring. Where doing different jobs give excitement. Moreover, employees doing different jobs, and they get a large range of information from their work. That helps them to become successful. For example, 75% of successful employees had done various work in their life, which was written in a survey of The University of Gujarat.
On the other hand, there are numbers of things which indicated that having the same job is reasonable. Firstly, if people do the same work for a long time, then they get superior command on that work. They will do that work very smoothly. Secondly, people have a good understanding if they do any work for a very long time, therefore the margin of error will decrease. For instance, since Google started hiring experienced employees, the error rate was reduced. That was described in The annual report of Google.
To conclude, although doing different jobs is beneficial, having the same job is more helpful than various jobs. In my opinion, having the same job for a lifetime is superior.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 177, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...me, then they feel that work is boring. Where doing different jobs give excitement. M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87169811321 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50585359564 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51320754717 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.4911579132 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.7222222222 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7222222222 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94444444444 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289736177776 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111981759223 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818591846712 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218410989728 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564770522201 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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