Some people think that governments of developing countries should introduce new technology to improve the quality of life, while some people believe that the best way is to develop education. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Nowadays, people in developing countries pay more attention to their living standard. While more investments allocated to education by government will improve people’s living conditions to some extent, I believe that it’s better to bring in more creative technologies.
On the one hand, developing novel techniques will improve work efficiency, which allows people to spare more time for relaxing. For example. one most typical device of our time is the smartphone, which enable people to communicate more effective with partner when they cooperate a complex project. Another profound product of the modern technology is the laptop. This portable electronic offers workers with free choices to choose their working place. Therefore, even if they have to complete their work tasks at a pleasant weekend, they are allowed to work from home through laptop without extra commuting time.
On the other hand, if government provides more investments towards education, more and more people will receive higher education and build expertise in their profession. This will help them become more competitive than their peers when pursuing a satisfied job. If they receive such a cushy job, they will be energetic in workplace and therefore get their deserved well-paid salaries. With enough money, people can afford everything they want and travel abroad to everywhere they dream. This will finally enhance their life satisfaction and live a better life.
Overall, although improved technological products save our time for working, I reckon that we should attach more importance on educational development to radically enhance our life standard with enough money.
- Some people think that governments of developing countries should introduce new technology to improve the quality of life while some people believe that the best way is to develop education Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- Some people think that governments of developing countries should introduce new technology to improve the quality of life while some people believe that the best way is to develop education Discuss both views and give your opinion 56
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...ce our life standard with enough money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i reckon, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 240.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59583333333 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75307593127 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6349491291 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.916666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176055475891 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06619497008 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685742311231 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129678158928 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749029040756 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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