Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is currently a contentious argument over whether the government's abolishment of university tuition fee regardless of students' socio-economic background is necessary. While this is valid to some extent, I believe that there might be some problems.
There are several reasons why higher education should be free for all students. It significantly benefits students, especially whose family is struggling with financial problems as the provision of free-of-charge education offers them an opportunity to get a stable job. If they are not assisted, the lack of money for college may result in their quitting studying to make a living by becoming a waiter or a worker. Furthermore, the accelerating number of people pursuing tertiary education would give rise to a more educated workforce that significantly contributes to economic prosperity.
However, I would argue that these advantages are outweighed by the drawbacks. In the increasingly competitive job market, a bachelor's degree might not ensure that every job seekers could succeed. Moreover, when the government takes charge of the tuition fee, budget deficiency is seemingly inevitable. As a result, society will not only suffer from tax hikes but also the reduction in wellfares.
In conclusion, although tuition waiving seems to be a good idea, I think that it might have some adverse influences on both students and society. This is because of the competition among job seekers and the possible imbalance in governmental monetary distribution.
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- some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'governments'' or 'government's'?
Suggestion: governments'; government's
...a contentious argument over whether the governments abolishment of university tuition fee r...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a bachelor' or simply 'bachelors'?
Suggestion: a bachelor; bachelors
...he increasingly competitive job market, a bachelors degree might not ensure that every job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51293103448 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19209773672 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689655172414 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1673034881 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.583333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189268103364 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569304547108 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519401252924 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980749705671 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587357806936 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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