Life today is easier nd more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Over the years different generations face different kind of challenges in their lifetime. The thought that today life has become much easier crosses everyone's mind who has lived and seen the older times altogether. I do not think this this idea is certainly true because of the following three reasons.
The idea that life is comfortable holds a different meaning for everyone. Someone, who works at a farm and or is a professional doctor, life may seem a little more comfortable due to less physical travel and work required in their field after the industrialization. But if we look at other scenarios, such as life of a teacher or a lawyer, things are not as easy and comfortable as they seems. Today even getting a job has become extremely competitive and people work hard for many years to get a full time job. Whereas, in older times before industrial revolution, getting a job was not even a necessity. Hence, though there are some things that like internet and good transportation has made the life much easier for this generation, but this does not account for overall improvement in quality of life because the need to work and compete has also significantly increased in past twenty years.
Our perception and capability to tackle difficulty level also depends on constant practice. One person who may be from a newer generation may find even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becomes tiring. On the other hand, there can be another person who enjoys driving car as they never used to go to work by car twenty years ago, hence driving made their life easier. Therefore, the level of difficulty of any task is relative to the capacity of the person who is performing it. This capacity for tackling a task that is difficult to perform physically, has reduced over time in the current generations.
In today's world, everyone is stressed due to increased competition in every field. Be it crucial things such as getting a job through several rounds of interviews or being up to date on the latest fashion. Everything is extremely different from the times of our grandparents. Today, our generation stresses out at the minimal issues that our grandparents may have considered useless. For instance, in current generation, most of the children are burdened with the pressure of getting good grades in school, whereas no one was concerned about grades in our grandparent's generations. Our grandparents usually tell us adventurous stories from their childhood.Can a child from 21st century imagine a life so free and full of imagination as it was then? The answer is no. This is because of the increasing global population and competition. Everyone today feels stuck in a rat race and blame capitalism for shrinking opportunities to spend time with families and friends.
In conclusion, the life that both the generations have lived are not roughly comparable and each have their own challenges. Our grandparents may had to walk for several kilo meters to send a message to their family but with the increased ease and resources, the need to send it quickly today has also increased. This shows that although life seems much comfortable today in terms of physical work, the pressure building on everyone's mind cannot be ignored making both generations facing equal difficulties but of different kinds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: this
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Suggestion: seem
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Suggestion: fulltime
...eople work hard for many years to get a full time job. Whereas, in older times before ind...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...past twenty years. Our perception and capability to tackle difficulty level al...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... even the easiest tasks such as driving everyday to office as difficult because it becom...
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Suggestion: Can
...dventurous stories from their childhood.Can a child from 21st century imagine a lif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2799.0 1977.66487455 142% => OK
No of words: 561.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98930481283 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86198803263 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 884.7 618.680645161 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.8445247696 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.653846154 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5769230769 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88461538462 5.45110844103 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172220622385 0.236089414692 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437694304286 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403859407471 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0961033589351 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431869807335 0.0645574589148 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 86.8835125448 132% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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