The difference in age between parent and their children has increased completely to the past.
Do you think the advantage of the trend outweighs the disadvantage?
It is a fact that nowadays the age difference between parents and their children has been changing than past. In the past, there was a major age difference rather than the present. In my opinion, it is good enough because today's parents are understood all situations very easily than before, besides they aware of technology and children mindset it is good to befit then drawbacks.
There is some reason, which is indicated that it is a great effect on today's generation. To begin with, parents has ideas about different study filled and the second thing is they give freedom to their child to decide their way, whatever they want to be. So it is very important for their future they can make their own decisions. Moreover, when children take it after that they realise about what happened to make a decision a find way for it, it helps them to improve self-confidence. Apart from that, nowadays parents stimulate their child for doing some creative and take a part in the competition so it is succour child ability and some it is helpful to find their way for future.
However, in the past time parents tried to make their children who could fit in their society, somehow that time they were not well updated their self and all of the knowledge about the different fields and their value. Such as some decade ago one of my friend's father not allowed to select a hospitality course because they thought that that was only for the waiter and cleaning room. My friend is very profound in India cousin, he is best at making different foods despite that they decided to select another field because their parents do not support him. So it happened in past many parents had no idea about some things.
In my recapitulation, in the present era parents are more friendly than in past. Apart from this today's they support their children in all categories the reason behind it is the age difference and modern world. It is good to start for children progress and they have better and great future ahead.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 71, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'todays'' or 'today's'?
Suggestion: todays'; today's
... indicated that it is a great effect on todays generation. To begin with, parents has ...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... their way for future. However, in the past time parents tried to make their children wh...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ey were not well updated their self and all of the knowledge about the different fields an...
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Line 3, column 281, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'selecting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: selecting
...go one of my friends father not allowed to select a hospitality course because they thoug...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...sent era parents are more friendly than in past. Apart from this todays they support th...
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Line 4, column 92, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... more friendly than in past. Apart from this todays they support their children in a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, well, apart from, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 24.0651302605 216% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1646.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67613636364 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38311467143 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508522727273 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3798923056 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.733333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4666666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249180858576 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101849133541 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0837107151358 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177141190224 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422691792994 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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