Deforestation is clearing Earth's forests on a massive scale. What are the reasons and what can be done to solve this problem?
To begin with, the weighty issue of deforestation results from both societal and economic factors. Initially, there is a likelihood that overpopulation is the root cause of this matter. The increasing world population, indeed, leads to the spread of human habitation, accompanied by the increasing demand for land areas for humans to inhabit and produce sufficient food; therefore, forests tend to be cut down to make way for agricultural plantations and settlements. Additionally, deforestation also stems from various elements related to economy, industrialization to illustrate. There is a rising number of companies nowadays majoring in paper production, which requires a considerable quantity of raw materials coming from forests, wood for instance. This leads to a wide range of trees cut down aiming for commercial purposes without planting new ones or a major reason for deforestation.
For such reasons, several solutions can be drastically carried out by the authorities and dwellers to resolve this negative issue. Firstly, there is a need for the government to impose stricter laws and regulations to limit and control the excessive deforestation, from heavy penalties to being in prison for example. Thus, this will probably make a contribution to enforce and raise their awareness of inhabitants in preserving our forests by planting more trees. Furthermore, individual members of the society should take action and play their role. By way of illustration, with the flourish of technology, the general public should get used to altering the way they use to write or take notes, from paper to several technological devices such as smart phones and laptops, which may reduce the demand for using items made by wood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...leads to the spread of human habitation, accompanied by the increasing demand for...
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Line 4, column 614, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...n, with the flourish of technology, the general public should get used to altering the way the...
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Line 4, column 670, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...hould get used to altering the way they use to write or take notes, from paper to s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44814814815 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15793902335 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.4152974512 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.727272727 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922303833893 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0376119631173 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029439117179 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.073147913802 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00390212986246 0.056905535591 7% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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