The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present. Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The two maps illustrate how a seaside village changed over the period of 26 years starting from 1995.
It can be clearly seen that the village underwent a dramatic transformation. The main changes of the village from 1995 to the present were that commercial fishing disappeared and this village became less green with the construction of recreational centers.
Looking at the maps in more details, the farmland and forest park were located in the Northeast area of the village were demolished to make way for recreational activities such as golf and tennis. In addition, more houses were erected, increasing the total of houses from 12 to 16 in the northwest of the village. One further development was the expansion of the road next to the houses, located west of the village.
Another noteworthy change that happened was the conversion of the shop and fish market on either side of the seaside road to the restaurant and apartments, respectively. In particular, the fishing port, located south of the village was removed. Furthermore, the only places that remained the same over the period of 26 years were the hotel and the café, and a new car park was also built to the east of the hotel in the present day.
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- The map below shows the development of a seaside village between 1995 and the present Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, look, so, in addition, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1010.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85576923077 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75529009738 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543269230769 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4377985676 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.222222222 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129401301617 0.215688989381 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0533590750817 0.103423049105 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0405898738892 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874957172131 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0354530334143 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.