Some people think that helping their children with homework is a good idea other believe children should do their homework on their own . Discuss both views and give your opinion .
The numerous people are helping their children in their homework because children are not aware how to complete thier work. Nowadays,a host of people think it is better to help their children whereas some are not agree with this , they believe offspring should complete their work by their own. Both view points have their own justification . I will discuss both the views in the subsequent paragraph.
To begin with , if parents are involve in children homework it is extremely beneficial for them . The predominant is idea generation . To elaborate , in children life , their is lack of idea due to which they cannot score good however if parents help their children in work then they learn new things, words and brand new ideas by which children can score good in their subjects. Secondly, the other benefit is it reduce confusion. To clarify , while completing home assisments little one do not know how to complete their work due to which they cannot finalized their work. Thus if parents can help they easily understand every single thing and complete their work without confusion . Therefore, mother is a best teacher in ther world to learn distinctive things .
Aside form this , i think it is beneficial for child if they ended their school assignment by their own without other help. The most highlighted benefit is children became self made . To elucidate, if child is addicted to some thing then it is difficult for them to leave that. Same in study if someone start helping their wards in homework then they totally lay on them . So that's why i think it is better for child to finish their homeowork by themself.
In conclusion , both view have their own points but according to my prospective. I think children should do their homework on their own without guardian help.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...he subsequent paragraph. To begin with , if parents are involve in children home...
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Suggestion: involved
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...work it is extremely beneficial for them . The predominant is idea generation . To...
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...nefit is it reduce confusion. To clarify , while completing home assisments little...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...which they cannot finalized their work. Thus if parents can help they easily underst...
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...nd complete their work without confusion . Therefore, mother is a best teacher in ...
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Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ithout confusion . Therefore, mother is a best teacher in ther world to learn dis...
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...n ther world to learn distinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is benef...
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...n distinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is beneficial for child if t...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...istinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is beneficial for child if the...
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Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ted benefit is children became self made . To elucidate, if child is addicted to s...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
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Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...to leave that. Same in study if someone start helping their wards in homework then th...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...n homework then they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for c...
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Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...work then they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for child to f...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for child to finish ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r homeowork by themself. In conclusion , both view have their own points but acc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90365448505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53274051225 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498338870432 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8927081841 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.569743288214 0.244688304435 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187434884691 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149501896048 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415274926572 0.151304729494 274% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133721471567 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , a
...are how to complete thier work. Nowadays,a host of people think it is better to he...
^^
Line 1, column 214, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...elp their children whereas some are not agree with this , they believe offspring shou...
^^^^^
Line 1, column 229, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ren whereas some are not agree with this , they believe offspring should complete ...
^^
Line 1, column 341, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...view points have their own justification . I will discuss both the views in the su...
^^
Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he subsequent paragraph. To begin with , if parents are involve in children home...
^^
Line 2, column 32, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'involved'.
Suggestion: involved
...graph. To begin with , if parents are involve in children homework it is extremely be...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 96, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...work it is extremely beneficial for them . The predominant is idea generation . To...
^^
Line 2, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...hem . The predominant is idea generation . To elaborate , in children life , their...
^^
Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...minant is idea generation . To elaborate , in children life , their is lack of ide...
^^
Line 2, column 167, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ration . To elaborate , in children life , their is lack of idea due to which they...
^^
Line 2, column 170, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
...ion . To elaborate , in children life , their is lack of idea due to which they canno...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 443, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nefit is it reduce confusion. To clarify , while completing home assisments little...
^^
Line 2, column 576, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...which they cannot finalized their work. Thus if parents can help they easily underst...
^^^^
Line 2, column 684, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd complete their work without confusion . Therefore, mother is a best teacher in ...
^^
Line 2, column 708, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ithout confusion . Therefore, mother is a best teacher in ther world to learn dis...
^
Line 2, column 764, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n ther world to learn distinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is benef...
^^
Line 3, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...n distinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is beneficial for child if t...
^^
Line 3, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...istinctive things . Aside form this , i think it is beneficial for child if the...
^
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ted benefit is children became self made . To elucidate, if child is addicted to s...
^^
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
.... To elucidate, if child is addicted to some thing then it is difficult for them to leave ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 304, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'starts'.
Suggestion: starts
...to leave that. Same in study if someone start helping their wards in homework then th...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n homework then they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for c...
^^
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...work then they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for child to f...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...they totally lay on them . So thats why i think it is better for child to finish ...
^
Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...r homeowork by themself. In conclusion , both view have their own points but acc...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90365448505 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53274051225 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498338870432 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8927081841 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7222222222 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.569743288214 0.244688304435 233% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187434884691 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.149501896048 0.0667982634062 224% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.415274926572 0.151304729494 274% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.133721471567 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.