The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2003

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The chart below gives information about the purpose of visits to five cities in the UK in 2003.

The bar chart gives information about the purpose of travels to five cities in the UK in 2013

Overall, the numbrr of cases of London with Birmingham increased over the period given. The highest number of Edinburgh. The Birmingham can be seen in UK cities .

In the fist country, the figure for Holiday the most significant diffirence expenditure between two countries. It reached at just below 60 propotion of visitors. The expenditure of Holiday was also high just below70, the lowest expenditure was on stood at just below 20 which accounted under 30 for all countries. Futhermore, in Monchester, the figure for Business ranked at just over 30. And other figures indicates rise slighty just below 30 rate of visitors. In the following country, the figures Holiday dipped slighty ranked at 20 proportion of traveles. However, Business initially stood at just below 50 percatage of visitors, and also visiting friends or relatives reached at 20.

From this point, in Liverpool, the highest point is Holiday but other figures rise steadily in UK cities. And also Endinburgh was generally higher than other four countries.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... The Birmingham can be seen in UK cities . In the fist country, the figure for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18579234973 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74631885431 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7788000445 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0833333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.25 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 5.23603664747 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186474324946 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641987719481 0.103423049105 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100826322069 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182755226978 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.226612005845 0.0819641961636 276% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.2329268293 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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