In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers.
Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?
It is often held that, technological equipment continues to be a controversial topic in all countries . This essay will advantages and disadvantage both these points of view and argue in favour of the latter .
On the one hand , some people argue that , Nowadays ,the number of cars increase year by year , and as a result of public transport crowded to each other , and people can go to work by own car . Many people think that, this factors are predominant in peoples life future , and others belive that impact their offspring in more critical pleases by car and buses . Futhermore , when people challannges for accross the road, the main reoson that almost has a car in the roads .
On the other hand, Many people believe that, almost all the time visitors visit travelling inside, and as a result of connected with transports .Recently , other factors this question marks in all countries , but the goverment should reduse the number of transport . In addition , all passengers whole with people , which is why , people compolsary go to traveling inside , partipularly museum. Finally other factors, all people make a face crowded , if they are hurry and go to somewhere by cars and trucks . It might be lace of oxigiens for breath . That's why , people try to go through small cars, especially own cars to travelling .
To sum up, it is beneficial side lots of travelling inside via vehicle . Becouse of it might be free and do not worry about themselves.
- Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle To what extent do you agree or disagree 67
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 2012 100
- In the future all cars buses and trucks will be driverless The only people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages 56
- The chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in Newport city center from 2003 2012
- The spread of multinational companies and the resulting increase of globalization produce positive effects on everyone Do you agree or disagree 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, so, in addition, as a result, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90204081633 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69346696782 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595918367347 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7426773756 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.279223888539 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977961095984 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297120166649 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161280758443 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189841068057 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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