You own an old item that you think is valuable and would like to sell. Write a letter to the owner of an antique’s shop. In your letter
• explain how you found the shop
• describe the item that you would like to sell
• say how much you would like to sell the item for
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter with regards to one of the table lamp of ancient times that I am willing to sell at your shop.
To begin with, please allow me to explain you how I came across your shop. As I am a great lover of collecting old coins, while surfing on internet I found the name of your shop. Intact, the Photo gallery available online fascinated me a lot. With the advancement of technology, it has now become easy to check the authenticity. In addition to it, I enquired about your place in Google listing and found to be legitimate
As for the item, it is the 18th century lantern, 3 feet in height and is made up of copper that is joint to a brown wooden table. Above all, it incredible dazzling stone engraved on its body gives twinkling light when gets lighted. Not only it gives beautiful light but also it gives fantastic look when placed at the corner of the room. Also, the maintenance of the light has been kept on regular basis.
Besides, I am anxious to sell this lamp in not less than 2 lakhs rupees. Because of its existence till date this antiquity matters a lot and I find the selling price worth it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Urvashi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, then, while, as for, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 997.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45089285714 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38410830649 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647321428571 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6499812178 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6923076923 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188648689007 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574718489035 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627158976025 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0996399144129 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465622906367 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.