it is now possible for scientist and tourist to travel to remote natural environment such as south pole. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages
In this contemporary era, The population rate increasing daily, therefore and create an issue of land. Scientists and tourists can go to a remote natural environment like the south pole today. This essay will explain both aspects of this phenomenon and also give reasons why it is a negative development, which described in the subsequent paragraphs.
To embarks with, there are plenty of things, which indicate that going to remote areas are positive. First and foremost, if people go to those places like the south pole, then they will receive a new experience. Also, that creates a new opportunity for jobs in tourist sectors. Furthermore, scientists can do an accurate observation of the Sun and other galaxies, because there is not any pollution. For example, the majority of space research centres are situated way away from residential and commercial places.
On the other hand, there are various reasons, which illustrate that it is harmful. Firstly, pollution is increasing in those parts of the world, which will generate an impact on the environment as well as on the global food chain. The glacier of the south pole will start melting. Secondly, if research centres are located in the remote areas, then scientist find difficulty for living and transport. For instance, One laboratory situated in the south pole was closed because of transportation problems, which written in a report of NASA.
To conclude, although remote places are vital for tourists and scientists, it has more drawbacks than benefits. In my opinion, the advantages of remote areas do not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21235521236 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86630067362 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586872586873 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.572403158 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2621242295 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873809027709 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860230424875 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159981246038 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336449037997 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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