The diagram below shows the production of olive oil.
The diagram explains the process for the making of olive oil. Overall, there are a total of seven stages, beginning with picking olives and culminating in the selling of the oil.
Initially, ripe olives are gathered from the trees and are put in baskets. The second step is that olives are rinsed in cold water by a machine to get rid of dirt and any detrimental insects, then clean olives are moved on the belt to the next machine. Consequently, olives are smashed in order to be smooth. At this stage, ground olives are made into paste, and olive stones are removed.
The olive paste is then put into a bag with holes before being put into a pressing machine. Once the bag has been pressed, olive paste is processed by a separating machine to remove excess water from the oil. Ultimately, olive oil is packaged and then delivered to shops or markets where it will be sold.
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- The pie charts below show a comparison of different kinds of energy production in France in two years
- Some people think that children should start formal education at schools as early as possible others feel that the children should go to schools when they are at least seven years old Discuss both views and give your own opinion 73
- Lectures were used as a main method of teaching for the greater number of students in the past With the existing technology there is no longer any justification for that method To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Increasing numbers of students are going to university instead of working after high school Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 84
- The diagram below shows the production of olive oil 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...king of olive oil. Overall, there are a total of seven stages, beginning with picking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57594936709 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.337637472 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588607594937 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0650189727 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.23603664747 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271575743901 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128589682842 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682196009497 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203252651626 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576331069023 0.0819641961636 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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