You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in one of the voluntary work which your company, cultural expeditions is carrying out in the developing countries. Please allow me to explain you the reason.
To begin with, I have a curiosity to get myself involved in the betterment of single women. Not only doing task for our society but also want to make women’s life better in in other country. As it is well said that the charity begins at home. On top of it, I have a realization that the developing country needs to understand the women empowerment.
Moreover, it’s being 10 years I have been working with non-profitable organization as a part timer. Also, my profile is into HR management, where I come across plethora of queries related to women strengthening expertise, so I know how to resolve them effectively.
As I am a social worker so I have friends across countries and few of my friends told me the condition of women in Pakistan is not really upto the mark. Besides, I have enquired about it from other agencies as well. I am willing to volunteer myself there for 3 months so that I can talk to different women and can bring happiness and confidence in their lifestyle.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely
Urvashi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: in
...t also want to make women’s life better in in other country. As it is well said that ...
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Line 5, column 192, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...omen’s life better in in other country. As it is well said that the charity begins...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, really, so, then, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74324324324 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8256028257 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653153153153 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1138934775 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16855644583 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055478910991 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584990412965 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995825152157 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868702395543 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.