Some people think that young people should follow social traditions. Others think that they should be free to have their own way of living and behaving. Discuss both statements and give your own opinion?
It is sometimes argued that the traditions of society are crucial to the cultivation of well-adjusted adults. However, I would side with those who argue that greater autonomy better nurtures creativity.
On the one hand, social traditions educate younger people as to have appropriate manners and morals. This case is exemplified perfectly in the case of Vietnamese customs and habits. Traditionally minded Vietnamese parents instill in their children the value of bowing to their seniors, displaying their deep respect and appreciation. Similarly, teens are raised to be reliable and generous, not capitalizing on the misfortunes of others for their own advantages. These traditional practices stimulate young Vietnamese’s global reputation for being professional and cooperative, which facilitates chances for both friendships and business collaborations.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that freedom of choice fosters creativity and its concomitant results in innovation. For instance, many Japanese parents encourage their offspring to design and wear their own outfits instead of accepting those generally worn by older generations. This has resulted in many pushing traditional boundaries, mingling unique costumes and aesthetics inspired by their favorite anime characters, which is known as “costume play” in Japan. Nowadays, the hobby has evolved into a global cultural phenomenon and inspired modern fashion designs and performances both on and off stage. Such an innovative culture might have been inadvertently stymied if all Japanese youngsters rigidly followed the tradition of wearing formal Kimonos and Yukatas.
In conclusion, although traditional standards of behavior are of importance to some extent, teenagers should be free to shape their own lifestyles. In my opinion, governments and schools ought to incentivize more platforms for youngsters to present and discuss novel ideas that can make positive contributions to society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, similarly, so, still, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.24087591241 5.12529762239 122% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.68946152963 2.80592935109 131% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70802919708 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5085023537 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5714285714 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247702847172 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714153384497 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622187526969 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125787512687 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700117089914 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.81 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.91 12.4159519038 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.38 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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